Online fiction é Human Condition MOBI Á

Online fiction  é Human Condition MOBI Á
  • online fiction
  • 245 pages
  • Human Condition
  • Jayne Finn
  • English
  • 10 March 2017

Human Condition[Reading] ➸ Human Condition Author Jayne Finn – Essayreview.co.uk It s Reagan is president, The Cosby Show is the most popular show on television and the radio blares Shout incessantly At the University of Michigan in Ann Arbor, Mike Ross spills some acid on himsel It sReagan is president, The Cosby Show is the most popular show on television and the radio blares Shout incessantly At the University of Michigan in Ann Arbor, Mike Ross spills some acid on himself in a lab and is rescued by football star Joe Lassiter What ensues is funny, touching, realistic and riveting readingWarning there is a violent rape scene in this book not between the main characters.


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10 thoughts on “Human Condition

  1. says:

    The Good Beautiful love story I m a complete sucker for romances that take place over a long span of time I always finish feeling like I ve actually spent years with the characters, and it seems to leave aprofound impression on me than the instalove I see so often This may be the most realistic portrayal of a gay for you themed story that I ve come across There weren t buckets of angst or pages and pages of whining Just two characters trying to figure out themselves, and each other The Good Beautiful love story I m a complete sucker for romances that take place over a long span of time I always finish feeling like I ve actually spent years with the characters, and it seems to leave aprofound impression on me than the instalove I see so often This may be the most realistic portrayal of a gay for you themed story that I ve come across There weren t buckets of angst or pages and pages of whining Just two characters trying to figure out themselves, and each other Mike and Joe felt very real to me, and their story felt believable There were a few moments in this that squeezed my guts badly and I may have shed a tear or two view spoiler Their first time together almost killed me The awkward moments and nervousness, combined with their excitement was too, too much sigh hide spoiler The Bad This is written in first person, present narrative It doesn t always bother me, but in this particular case it did There were a few times that the MC even addressed me directly The readerI didn t like it I want to feel voyeuristic, pretend I m not here Reading the prologue helped explain why it s written that way, but I still never really got over it.There are also a ton of typos I m not a grammar Nazi, and usually it wouldn t bother me, but this was kind of ridiculous I loved this book so much I want to proofread it myself For free Overall Even with all the many things that bothered me, I would still put this on the re read shelf I 3 Mike and Joe I want to scribble their names on my notepad and dedicate a love song to them I would recommend this to any m m fan, so long as you realize this is a free book, so don t expect the pretty package If you can see past the grammatical errors, and sometimes annoying narrative, you ll find a pretty damn good story

  2. says:

    4 4.5 StarsStory Content Warning Some Torture, Rape This free online story was a great read and a long one at that too Sometimes this piece felt overly long, and I was hoping fordialogue a lot of the time in order to showinteractions between the characters, my eyes kept scanning down the screen looking for dialogue, as so much of this is just narration but it was well written and well done overall I think many of the reviews of this story, here on goodreads, are well done too 4 4.5 StarsStory Content Warning Some Torture, Rape This free online story was a great read and a long one at that too Sometimes this piece felt overly long, and I was hoping fordialogue a lot of the time in order to showinteractions between the characters, my eyes kept scanning down the screen looking for dialogue, as so much of this is just narration but it was well written and well done overall I think many of the reviews of this story, here on goodreads, are well done too, so rather than summarize the entire plot, I ll share my personal feelings about it.This is a best friends to lovers story and can be considered gay for you Although I did see some abuse tags for this piece, I wasn t really expecting to read about a rape, and if this is a sensitive subject to you, I would not suggest that you read this The torture and rape scene in this is relatively short and not extremely, extremely graphic, but it is graphic and the character s recuperation process from the rape also takes up a large chunk of this story If rape is not an overly sensitive subject for you, I would suggest that you not let that deter you from reading this, as there is much, muchto this story than rape.Towards the end of the story view spoiler Towards the end of this story, it did seem drawn out and I dislike it when the two MCs spend so much time apart from each other that the reader begins to forget their spark This sort of happens, in my opinion, and although this story certainly revolved around Mike and Joe s relationship, I wish there wasinteraction between them, especially in the middle portion and second half of this story Except for he last chapter hide spoiler All this being said, this was a good read and as long as it was, I liked that about this The writing style was interesting with each chapter beginning in the present and then flashing back to the past this may sound confusing, but it is not Additionally, because it is set up this way, we know what will happen with the two MCs from the very beginning of this story But the vast majority of this story takes place in the 1980s when the two MCs are in college This story was certainly better than many ebooks that I have paid for and it is always great to find some free online fiction that is well done I d recommend this story if you like FREE Fiction best friends to loversGFY College Age CharactersSex Scenes AngstDramaLong StoriesThis definitely was not a light read at all and I would recommend it when you have time and are in the mood to read a long story that is dramatic as opposed to funny

  3. says:

    3.65The first 70% of this was great The establishment of the friendship is well done, the host of characters are interesting, and the tension between Mike and Joe and that which infuses the story, will they or won t they figure it out, is strong and compelling I also liked the structure a lot It s wonderful that even with a flash back narrative structure there remains a palpable sense of tension So this lot was a pleasure to read, albeit with a couple huh moments, but generally really good 3.65The first 70% of this was great The establishment of the friendship is well done, the host of characters are interesting, and the tension between Mike and Joe and that which infuses the story, will they or won t they figure it out, is strong and compelling I also liked the structure a lot It s wonderful that even with a flash back narrative structure there remains a palpable sense of tension So this lot was a pleasure to read, albeit with a couple huh moments, but generally really good.The last 30% fell off for me somewhat I felt like I lost the handle on seeing and feeling Joe as if in running, he ran off the page and out of my focus and clear chracterisation of him Then the last 20% with the first time sex didnt work for me either It was a mix of clinical writing, a few dashes of purple prose, and a whole lot of vanilla ness that left me sort of bored Oh yeah, and there is a considerable amount of grammatical errors shan t interrupt comprehension but for the grammatically conscious, it s noticeable

  4. says:

    Better than average free online story of a man s recounting of how he and his partner finally got together Each chapter starts with a moment in current time before going back to the past between five and eight years earlier Definitely worth a look, but be warned, it does contain a rape scene by a relative stranger.

  5. says:

    Human Condition is one of my all time favorite books It reads like a diary into four years of the lives of two college students Mike Ross, who is a freshman at the University of Michigan studying pre law and star football quarterback, Joe Lassiter, also a freshman in pre med They meet due to an unfortunate chemistry lab accident and become best friends and maybeMike, who is gay, falls in love with Joe, who isn t, and the story catalogues their struggles through college, boyfriends, g Human Condition is one of my all time favorite books It reads like a diary into four years of the lives of two college students Mike Ross, who is a freshman at the University of Michigan studying pre law and star football quarterback, Joe Lassiter, also a freshman in pre med They meet due to an unfortunate chemistry lab accident and become best friends and maybeMike, who is gay, falls in love with Joe, who isn t, and the story catalogues their struggles through college, boyfriends, girlfriends, tragedy and whether Joe will ever discover how deeply Mike feels about him.The reason I like this book is because it resonates with true emotions, not the usual trivialities of most male male college romances And it isn t just the main characters who have a story to tell it s also their friends and family who shine brightly, all seeing the deep and abiding love Mike and Joe have for each other, even if neither is aware of it themselves

  6. says:

    I found this book at least 5 or 6 years ago before I found the online booksellers and publishers I was stunned that this author was not publishing it The story is realistic, well written with characters that you like to love The character development is so strong that despite reading this story at least 10 times, I findin the characters personality than the time before Human Condition deserves to be expanded upon and SOLD Ms Finn is one of the most impressive writers I have read A I found this book at least 5 or 6 years ago before I found the online booksellers and publishers I was stunned that this author was not publishing it The story is realistic, well written with characters that you like to love The character development is so strong that despite reading this story at least 10 times, I findin the characters personality than the time before Human Condition deserves to be expanded upon and SOLD Ms Finn is one of the most impressive writers I have read A Human Condition is a jewel not yet discovered by MM readers across the board

  7. says:

    Bumpy start, but this little love story definitely grew on me As an unedited free read it certainly has its faults but the main characters really were quite endearing and despite the dramatic plot, a bit too much drama at times, one might add, Human Condition was definitely an engaging read that leaves you with a happy feeling in the end.

  8. says:

    Oh How I remember this love story It has everything for everyone a great little plot, just enough sex to keep you turned on but also a spark of life in the characters so that to feel that you really know them I wrote to the author not long after reading expressing my gratitude for such a great love story not over laden with sappiness and sex, but also hoped for a continuance of the story Sadly it seems when she had planned in her correspondence with me didn t go as planned Either way I stil Oh How I remember this love story It has everything for everyone a great little plot, just enough sex to keep you turned on but also a spark of life in the characters so that to feel that you really know them I wrote to the author not long after reading expressing my gratitude for such a great love story not over laden with sappiness and sex, but also hoped for a continuance of the story Sadly it seems when she had planned in her correspondence with me didn t go as planned Either way I still love this story, and recommend it to any and all members of our community for should they feel a little disconnected from love or desire Such is the perversity of the human condition The drive to love, to connect, is so strong that any attraction, no matter how hopeless, fills us Jayne Finn

  9. says:

    I like this story a lot It is a college coming of age story via flashbacks from an established relationship The writing is good, and I liked the characters, including friends and family The women characters were well done.Warning there is a nasty rape scene not between the MC s You ll see it coming and can just skip the chapter if needed.I haven t found any trace of the author after about 2003, so I have created a file in case the rather obsolete website goes away SInce it is free onlin I like this story a lot It is a college coming of age story via flashbacks from an established relationship The writing is good, and I liked the characters, including friends and family The women characters were well done.Warning there is a nasty rape scene not between the MC s You ll see it coming and can just skip the chapter if needed.I haven t found any trace of the author after about 2003, so I have created a file in case the rather obsolete website goes away SInce it is free online, I think this is OK Please PM me if you would like a copy unless I hear otherwise from the author

  10. says:

    3.5 starsThere were some really excellent scenes in this freebie that made it worth reading IMO Sometimes the time changes and space between scenes was a bit long, enough that I wondered what happened in that time period Some scenes were o.k and occasionally I wondered why they called each other best friends but kept so much distance, but I generally enjoyed this story NOTE there is a threesome scene in this book view spoiler that happens before the two MC s get together hide spoiler 3.5 starsThere were some really excellent scenes in this freebie that made it worth reading IMO Sometimes the time changes and space between scenes was a bit long, enough that I wondered what happened in that time period Some scenes were o.k and occasionally I wondered why they called each other best friends but kept so much distance, but I generally enjoyed this story NOTE there is a threesome scene in this book view spoiler that happens before the two MC s get together hide spoiler NOTE There is a rape scene in this book

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